ext_46901 ([identity profile] i-am-girlfriday.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] carpenyx 2006-08-13 01:32 am (UTC)

*to be said in snooty accent* Marvelous, darling. Thanks for giving Sharon a story.

#07 – Leaves

An orphaned leaf fell from above and she caught it, remembering the morning they walked out the door, never to return.


Wonderful foreshadowing.

#40 - Blue

As she slips on her crisp blue military uniform, she twirls in front of the mirror, smiling proudly then loses her balance, falling on her ass; she would always fumble on her landings.


Just love the the movement in this. It's so sad in a way.

#39 - Weather

The pouring rain soaks the ground; the bullet penetrates the machine masquerading as a woman and he looks up to see a ghost with a gun held high; she grins and says, “Time to get up mister!”


Ooh! Machine masquerading as a woman is so good!

#33 - Diamond

She knew she would never be allowed outside these four walls to marry the man she loved; she would not accept his proposal.


I love how the word diamond is such a symbol of everything she can never have. Touching.

Yay for you!

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