I am glad that it came across well, I had rewritten the scene with Melena panicking & was a little worried it wouldn't work well but I am glad that it did! :)

I'm very happy that you enjoyed it! I know I'm horribe with cliffhangers, LOL, nytel says I'm evil with cliffhangers, hehe

The next chapter has been beta'd but I still have some tinkering to do with it but it should be up by the weekend, hopefully. :)