You wrote this last chapter so beautifully. I love the three time frames. The present with Ronon looking out at the ocean and remembering his grief at Melena's last moments and his joy when he first discovered her again. It was truly bitter-sweet.
You did such a wonderful job on this story and I'm very glad you completed it. There's nothing worse than getting sucked into a story and the author loses interest. I guess that's why a lot of people refuse to read wips. Though sometimes real life gets in the way, but the result is the same.
The final lines were just enough to let us know Ronon will get through this. His friends won't let him brood and will make sure he takes care of himself.
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You wrote this last chapter so beautifully. I love the three time frames. The present with Ronon looking out at the ocean and remembering his grief at Melena's last moments and his joy when he first discovered her again. It was truly bitter-sweet.
You did such a wonderful job on this story and I'm very glad you completed it. There's nothing worse than getting sucked into a story and the author loses interest. I guess that's why a lot of people refuse to read wips. Though sometimes real life gets in the way, but the result is the same.
The final lines were just enough to let us know Ronon will get through this. His friends won't let him brood and will make sure he takes care of himself.
Thank you for writing such a lovely story :)