Awesome! I can't believe this is only your second time writing smut. You did a great job. I know just how intimidating it can be. The first time I wrote smut it was all out PWP. And almost 12 pages of it. Lol. After the first few times it gets easier though. :)
This was so sexy and sweet all at the same time. A perfect combination. And even though I don't normally read Sharon/Helo fics, I thoroughly enjoyed it. Bravo!
My favorite line had to be: Their bodies were aching for sanctuary within each other It was so poetic and just frakkin' wonderful.
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Date: 2007-04-21 06:25 pm (UTC)This was so sexy and sweet all at the same time. A perfect combination. And even though I don't normally read Sharon/Helo fics, I thoroughly enjoyed it. Bravo!
My favorite line had to be: Their bodies were aching for sanctuary within each other
It was so poetic and just frakkin' wonderful.
You did an awesome job my dear. *hugs*