Awesome! I can't believe this is only your second time writing smut. You did a great job. I know just how intimidating it can be. The first time I wrote smut it was all out PWP. And almost 12 pages of it. Lol. After the first few times it gets easier though. :)

This was so sexy and sweet all at the same time. A perfect combination. And even though I don't normally read Sharon/Helo fics, I thoroughly enjoyed it. Bravo!

My favorite line had to be: Their bodies were aching for sanctuary within each other
It was so poetic and just frakkin' wonderful.

You did an awesome job my dear. *hugs*