“Don’t you notice how all of the women stare at you when you walk by?”
We don't stare *whistles*

“Oh.” Ronon thought it over for a moment. “Is that why McKay stares at me all the time?”
Priceless! :P

pulling the plant (or rather the bundle of green leaves that had yet to blossom) out – roots and all
This made me literally, lol :P Yes, I laughed out loud. It's amusing watching Ronon be so awkward in Earth ways!

Great job with this! :D Makes me more willing to consider shipping these two.