Fic Requests: If Only (1/1) - K/L [PG] - Battlestar Galactica

[carpenyx]

"Five Things (Fic) Meme" Request for i_am_girlfriday

Title: If Only
Author: carpenyx
Rating: PG
Fandom: Battlestar Galactica
Pairings: Kara/Lee, Lee/Dee (implied)
Spoilers: Very light spoilers for the miniseries, AU-season 3
Disclaimer: I do not own.
Summary (Prompt): Five times Kara Thrace almost kisses Lee Adama. 
A/N: Cross posted at beyond_insane and bsg2003fics

Five Things Meme Request can be found, HERE.

If Only
(Five Times Kara Thrace almost kisses Lee Adama)
If it weren’t for the bars of the cell that separated them, she would have thrown her arms around him and kissed him; then he made that comment about her attitude and all she wanted to do was strike another superior asshole.

***

The second time Kara almost kissed the CAG is when he beat her hand of 3-on-a-run with full colors. It took a real man to challenge her buff, unlike the nugget who folded before the game even begun. She wanted to reach across the table, grab Lee by the dog tags, and pull him into a big sloppy kiss but she refrained. She would not let anyone see her happy that she lost, so she growled and demanded a rematch.

***

When his face turns bright red from anger and he is reprehending her, she wants to kiss him; she did not mean to break his viper, it just happened.

***

She seeks comfort in one man when everything gets frakked up. He wraps his arms around her, holding onto her tightly and reassures her that everything will be alright and she wants to believe him. She looks up into his eyes and wonders if kissing him would make the world disappear around them, even if it were just for a moment but she would never know because Dee interrupts them.

***

It had been months since she has seen him, her stomach clenches anxiously as she walks into the CIC of the Pegasus. When he turns and looks at her, her heart starts beating against her ribcage and she cannot help but run into his waiting arms, embracing him tightly. She wants to kiss him now but she knows that it would be inappropriate and even though she always breaks the rules, this one she can’t.

 

Comments

[tracyj23.livejournal.com]

Lovely! These are wonderful. I can't wait to read more - different prompts of course. I wasn't sure exactly what they were, so I figured I wait and read first. :)

I especially love the second-last one. How true - I love when they hug and everything seems right with the world ... and then something (ahem 'dee') goes and screws it all up.

[carpenyx.livejournal.com]

Thank you! I'm actually have fun with these, :)

I know! Dee...errr something always messes things up! *grrr* ;)

[jatnj.livejournal.com]

"She didn't mean to break his viper, it just happened." That was a great line.
These were all lovely. Loved them!

[carpenyx.livejournal.com]

Thank you! :)

[rjsteamboat76.livejournal.com]

very nice indeed. but still,why does everyone hate poor Dee? heh.

[carpenyx.livejournal.com]

I like Dee.

I just don't like Dee with Lee. Dee with Lee means no Kara with Lee and that's not a good thing.

I prefer Dee with Billy but whateva.

[rjsteamboat76.livejournal.com]

=)

[nebakanezer]

These are great. I love this line:

She would not let anyone see her happy that she lost, so she growled and demanded a rematch.

and

She looks up into his eyes and wonders if kissing him would make the world disappear around them

and

She wants to kiss him now but she knows that it would be inappropriate and even though she always breaks the rules, this one she can’t

nice :)

[carpenyx.livejournal.com]

Thanks! I'm having a blast doing these, :)

[nebakanezer]

Yes, I can tell you are having fun! Yay!

[i-am-girlfriday.livejournal.com]

These are beyond my expectations! I loved every single one of them. I think I love the last one best (although they are al awesome) because you really conveyed a sense of longing. It's not angst so much, but her heart aching to break her own rules.

She wants to kiss him now but she knows that it would be inappropriate and even though she always breaks the rules, this one she can’t.

Perfection. Thanks so much!!!!! You're rad as pilots!

[carpenyx.livejournal.com]

YAY! YOU LOVE! *G*

I totally dig that one also, :) Yay.

[latteaddict.livejournal.com]

Very nice!

The last one was especially lovely.

[carpenyx.livejournal.com]

Thank you! :)

[scullymulder123.livejournal.com]

Kay. I can't squee, here, and with a story like that, it's HARD not to. But my dad is asleep, and if I let out a loud, high pitched sound, such as a squee, he'll wake up, and that isn't good.

However, I really DID love it. It was exactly how I would imagine Kara would act in said situations....how I hope she would, anyway.

Wonderful job.

[carpenyx.livejournal.com]

Thank you! I am glad that you loved it. :) And sorry you can't squee! ;)

[nytel.livejournal.com]

Wow, these are awesome. I particularly liked the last one. *g*

Great job.

[carpenyx.livejournal.com]

Thank you! :D