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"Five Things (Fic) Meme" Request for [profile] tracyj23

Title: Just Once
Author: [personal profile] carpenyx
Rating: PG
Fandom: Battlestar Galactica
Pairings: Kara/Lee, Kara/Anders
Spoilers: Very light spoilers for series, AU-season 3
Disclaimer: I do not own.
Beta: [personal profile] nebakanezer
Summary (Prompt): Five times Lee Adama almost punches Kara Thrace.
A/N: Cross posted at [community profile] beyond_insane and [profile] bsg2003fics

Five Things Meme Request can be found, HERE.

Just Once
(Five times Lee almost punches Kara)


Once during a game of triad, Kara gets a little too cocky with the CAG – he doesn't take kindly to her attitude and when she spits ambrosia at him and it stains the front of his shirt, he stands up, the chair crashing to the floor behind him. He raises his hand with every intention of striking the hotshot pilot but a few nuggets quickly step in and hold him back.

***

She disobeys his orders again, and gives him a hundred and one reasons why, but all he wants to do is punch her for not listening again.

***

When he watches her with him - laughing, and joking around as they used to; he can’t help but feel the rage creep up. When she asks him to join them with that sinister laugh of hers, he can’t help but get the urge to strike her for breaking his heart… again.

***

She tells him of her intentions to move down to New Caprica with Anders and he feels a pang in his chest as he looks at her. He wants to ask her to stay and when he does; she takes it a little too personally – that’s when the arguing begins and he almost punches her but instead he walks away with the intention never to speak to her again.

***

It has been over a year since they last spoke and when she contacts him out of the blue – it’s about Anders and he wishes that she came in person so he could give her one mean left-hook for even thinking he’d want to help.

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Date: 2006-09-22 01:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] i-am-girlfriday.livejournal.com
That last one is really quite powerful. I guess we'll see very soon just how much Lee hates Kara. Great job! I think you muse is back!

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Date: 2006-09-22 01:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] carpenyx.livejournal.com
Yes, my muse is making appearances which makes me happy. :) Glad that you liked them, it was tough! I really don't like writing the anger and stuff between them, especially in the 4th and 5th ones, 'cause it's like.. almost permanant or something. :( I want my K/L to be happy!

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Date: 2006-09-22 01:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tracyj23.livejournal.com
Wow, those were great! I'd almost forgotten I'd asked you do them. :D My mind is spread way too thinly these days.

The first two were very typical - but once we got to the third one you started breaking hearts there. How icnredibly true they are. You were thinking of the bunkroom scene in LDYB2 weren't you? I can just imagine that's what Lee was thinking at that time.

The fourth one is a very plausible reason for why they aren't speaking to one another (or rather why he's still angry with her) a year later. As for the last one ... definitly possible that's what he was thinking.

I have a feeling 'Lee angry at Kara' is what we're going to see for a good chunk of season 3. And if the spoilers for episode 8 are true, we may even SEE some punching.

Thanks so much for doing these - they were great, in a heartbreaking sort of way. I'll have to ask for happier ones next time. :)

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Date: 2006-09-22 01:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] carpenyx.livejournal.com
I am really glad that you liked it. :)

The 3rd one of definately a spin on that scene in LDYB :)

I can see him being angry with her, enough to not talk to her for the simple reason of her leaving for New Caprica, I can also see him with the intention of not speaking to her but somehow knowing he's just angry but it gets out of hand and they don't talk or something. I could analyze Kara and Lee all day, LOL.

You are very welcome, :) it was hard to write, I mean, it wasn't but I like my pilots happy! hehe

(no subject)

Date: 2006-09-22 03:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tracyj23.livejournal.com
At least they're little short angst snippets - can you imagine writing 20 some chapters of angst? Yikes!

Are there more spaces for requests? If so, let me know so I can think of some happy/fluffy ones for you. :)

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Date: 2006-09-22 06:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] carpenyx.livejournal.com
you can request more, hehe :)

I'm working on a multiple chapter Stargate Atlantis fic and it's kind of angsty but no where near BSG angst, lol.

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Date: 2006-09-22 01:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ez-as-pi.livejournal.com
These are wonderful, they all invoke a strong visual for me.. Brava...

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Date: 2006-09-22 02:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] carpenyx.livejournal.com
Thank you very much. :)

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Date: 2006-09-22 02:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rjsteamboat76.livejournal.com
few word,yet capable of envoking powerful images. very good. whoever requested this should be squee-ing with glee. nice job. =)

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Date: 2006-09-22 03:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tracyj23.livejournal.com
Squeeing loads and loads. :D

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Date: 2006-09-22 03:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rjsteamboat76.livejournal.com
haha. girls are cute when they squee. boy, did i spell *invoke* wrong or what? heh.

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Date: 2006-09-22 06:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rjsteamboat76.livejournal.com
you're welcome. =) and really, i do know how tp spell..most of the time. heh. i always enjoy your fics.

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Date: 2006-09-22 05:50 pm (UTC)
From: [personal profile] nebakanezer
my fav lines:

he can’t help but feel the rage creep up

t sinister laugh of hers, he can’t help but get the urge to strike her for breaking his heart… again.


I think you captured them very well. I'm excited for S3, but I'm completely dreading it too! I'm going to need a prescription for fic fluff to get me through!

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Date: 2006-09-22 06:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] carpenyx.livejournal.com
Thank you muchly. :)

I'm excited but feel the same way, I'm really curious about all this we've been reading about the K/L relationship and the 'big' thing that happened... heh

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Date: 2006-09-22 06:21 pm (UTC)
From: [personal profile] nebakanezer
Well in a way I wonder if it wont live up to all the hype. With all the scenarios floating around in everyone's heads, could RDM really come up with something no one has thought of. Katee said it was nothing like she expected... And unfortunately we are going to have to wait for another 10 weeks to find out!

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Date: 2006-09-22 06:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tracyj23.livejournal.com
Yeah, and in 10 weeks my baby is due. With MY luck I'll be at the hospital the weekend the one episode I'm dying to see airs. (I'll just make Michael put it on the iPod and bring it to me then - one way to pass the time during labour - lol) :)

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Date: 2006-09-22 06:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] carpenyx.livejournal.com
Interesting way of medicating the labor pains, watch BSG - hehe

Yay for 10 weeks & your baby. :)

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Date: 2006-09-22 06:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] carpenyx.livejournal.com
I can't even imagine what it *could* be, that's my problem. I hear all these scenarios but I just don't know - but if it doesn't like up to the hype, I'd be a little disappointed. :P

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Date: 2006-09-22 11:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jatnj.livejournal.com
These were all very powerful. It's interesting to note how many of them end in "again." They always seem to be pushing the same buttons.

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Date: 2006-09-22 11:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tracyj23.livejournal.com
And there you have it. Five little situations where Lee and Kara push each other's 'mad' buttons over and over ... That about sums up the relationship doesn't it?

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Date: 2006-09-23 12:07 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jatnj.livejournal.com
It sure does. Every time I see a fic where they're mad at each other or pushing each other's buttons, I get more curious as to what breaks them apart at the end of S2 and then I get more excited about S3 starting IN TWO WEEKS!!!!!!!!!!!!

(no subject)

Date: 2006-09-23 01:34 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] carpenyx.livejournal.com
They do! They know *exactly* what buttons to push and everything.

Thanks for the comments. :)

(no subject)

Date: 2006-09-23 01:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jatnj.livejournal.com
They do! They know *exactly* what buttons to push and everything.

And that's why we love them so much yet want to slap them around at the same time.

Thanks for the comments. :)

You're welcome. :)

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